Mark Twain also utilizes another rhetorical device: inclusive diction. Inclusive diction is when the author of a text makes the reader feel connected to the content of the text by using words such as "we" or "our." Twain features the use of inclusive diction in order to allow the reader to make a personal connection to conformity. An example of this is when he states, "...self-approval. We all have to bow to that; there are no exceptions" (Paragraph 9, Lines 8-9). Twain incorporates the words "we all" to suggest that everyone is a victim to self-approval or conformity. The statement makes the reader feel like they are a part of the text, which allows the reader to think more deeply about if they are a victim to conformity. This elaborates his claim of how people are always influenced by someone else, since readers can relate to Twain's statement. Due to the fact that Twain is using words like "we all" to form a personal connection to the reader, he is using inclusive diction to support his purpose.
Mark Twain mainly addresses the idea of how everyone is always influenced by someone else in his text "Corn-Pone Opinions." I personally agree with that idea. Most people are going to be following what is popular at the time in order to fit in with everyone else. Not many people, including me, are willing to stand out as the unique person who is different from everyone else. Also, Twain mentions how people are always looking for approval in others. I agree with that because most people are going to be self-conscious of how they present themselves to others. Most people will want to make a good impression on others, which is why many people do the things they do. For me, I try to think in my head if what I'm going to say next will impact someone's perception of me. Whenever I say something I didn't mean to say or do something I didn't mean to do, I often wonder if the people around me will think poorly of me. That's why I prefer to be quiet most of the time, except when I'm talking about my interests with friends. However, I feel like many people can relate to how I feel, so I don't really worry too much anymore. No one is perfect and everyone will make mistakes.
Great use of diction! Twain making his writing inclusive definitely emphasizes the point he's trying to make.
ReplyDeleteI also wrote about this and elaborated on society's tendency to conform to the latest fad, giving it little to no thought. I think you brought up completely valid points.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with what you stated in your closing paragraph. I also feel that most people are often too afraid of what others might think of them and therefore often times choose to simply follow the crowd or like you said, keep things to themselves. I, too, am a quiet person and often abstain from participating in class in fear of giving a wrong answer or embarrassing myself. I absolutely adore your closing statement because it is true, we are all human and we do and will make mistakes throughout our lives.
ReplyDeleteHey Maggie, I really like your use of vocabulary! I think it really brings your writing together as a whole. Your writing style has a nice flow and it was easy to understand.
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